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My six sentence story

In He Puna Kawenga we have been writing a six sentence stories. Here is my slide show with my story.

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  1. Anonymous2 September 2019 at 17:22

    Hi Ebony
    I like your six sentence story because you added a lot of detail in your story. I wonder what kind of potion does she make?

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  2. Anonymous15 September 2019 at 17:27

    Hi Ebony
    I like your six sentence story because it has a lot of detail and it was very interesting. My favorite part is when Tayla the witch made some potions.

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  3. Anonymous10 November 2019 at 14:58

    Hey Ebony
    I like your six sentence story because you have used detail and lots of color. I like the part when you said "she is good at making potions and people always want to buy them."

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  4. Anonymous27 November 2019 at 14:47

    Hi Ebony
    I like your six sentence story because you describe your character. Why did you chose to make your character a witch?

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